tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post3484762942998357410..comments2023-12-29T20:49:43.018-07:00Comments on masago-no-haiku: Renhai Reflections 164: A Renhai, Step by Step: Some LinkingMasagohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-45089867585154842132010-02-04T20:23:16.237-07:002010-02-04T20:23:16.237-07:00Thanks all!
Pamela: :-) Yes, it does roll off a ...Thanks all!<br /><br />Pamela: :-) Yes, it does roll off a little better. I tough choice here but the image I had was about the "softness" that the velvet represents. I think having velvet last in the line as a noun (rather than an adjective) gives in the prominence that I think the image calls for. Thanks!Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-47377789560538334762010-02-04T09:39:16.433-07:002010-02-04T09:39:16.433-07:00I am following.
DianneI am following.<br />DianneDiannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-33100473073523309422010-02-04T07:37:39.066-07:002010-02-04T07:37:39.066-07:00Thanks for the illuminating glimpse of the process...Thanks for the illuminating glimpse of the process. Not at all like watching sausage being made!Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-32552766042159812010-02-04T04:59:42.407-07:002010-02-04T04:59:42.407-07:00standing by!!!
johnstanding by!!!<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-33622325450006091482010-02-03T20:02:00.444-07:002010-02-03T20:02:00.444-07:00I think I would say
"layer of velvet white&qu...I think I would say<br />"layer of velvet white"<br /><br />it just flows off my tongue better.<br />Or.. maybe it's just that I took my allergy medicine and my tongue is thick. heh heh.Pamelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404943895800549273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-80497400262796237362010-02-03T19:43:22.473-07:002010-02-03T19:43:22.473-07:00So much interesting to see how poetic minds work -...So much interesting to see how poetic minds work -- enjoying these Masago :)<br /><br />and the previous set too, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com