tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post4173760592522319133..comments2023-12-29T20:49:43.018-07:00Comments on masago-no-haiku: Renhai Reflections 44: Leaving BehindMasagohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-34358489520498404602008-11-17T19:14:00.000-07:002008-11-17T19:14:00.000-07:00Thank you all for you kind words on behalf of Jerr...Thank you all for you kind words on behalf of Jerry and me.<BR/><BR/>upinVermont: You may have some valid points, I plan to touch base with Jerry on this later this week and review your suggestions.Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-80296878703840952912008-11-17T13:39:00.000-07:002008-11-17T13:39:00.000-07:00These are wonderful and bring to mind the scene in...These are wonderful and bring to mind the scene instantly. I love the first one. As a kid we had to traverse a barbed wire fence. Thanks for the memory.get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-23522377955602357332008-11-17T03:42:00.000-07:002008-11-17T03:42:00.000-07:00A super theme that worked really well. All conten...A super theme that worked really well. All content not something that I would encounter but all worked. So many great specific words - coyote, zipline, dogwood. Very enjoyable.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-69679265688192784242008-11-16T19:38:00.000-07:002008-11-16T19:38:00.000-07:00The first Haiku is strong. I like it.The phrase "o...The first Haiku is strong. <BR/><BR/>I like it.<BR/><BR/>The phrase "on a sliver" seems to spell it out too much for me. It seems too deliberate.<BR/><BR/>The final Haiku is light and humorous. However, the use of the word "wild" seems, again, too deliberate. I wonder if it's necessary...upinVermonthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11541656511322678901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-4584163653748901882008-11-16T14:31:00.000-07:002008-11-16T14:31:00.000-07:00great stuff... well done you two!and thank you for...great stuff... well done you two!<BR/><BR/>and thank you for the zipline infopolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-7101977710674584642008-11-16T08:34:00.000-07:002008-11-16T08:34:00.000-07:00I love this new style. Your verse is always a deli...I love this new style. Your verse is always a delicacy of thought.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-85382500912490734952008-11-16T06:29:00.000-07:002008-11-16T06:29:00.000-07:00I see magic in this one: leaving the animal farm o...I see magic in this one: leaving the animal farm of our predatory nature behind…<BR/>Climbing – finding ourselves at the top of the next hill of our aspirations…<BR/>Freedom of perception – stepping through the crack between the worlds…Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-64074436575532056492008-11-16T01:56:00.000-07:002008-11-16T01:56:00.000-07:00love it toojohnlove it too<BR/>johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-11759769146399076542008-11-15T22:27:00.000-07:002008-11-15T22:27:00.000-07:00I agree with Janice. :)I agree with Janice. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-86040280314021844342008-11-15T21:49:00.000-07:002008-11-15T21:49:00.000-07:00Gosh I love this one - the images one gets are so ...Gosh I love this one - the images one gets are so precise and nostalgic for me. What a great set -Kudos to you both.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-7918395967241898512008-11-15T20:36:00.000-07:002008-11-15T20:36:00.000-07:00Hi Masago,I am not going to leave this behind :-))...Hi Masago,<BR/><BR/>I am not going to leave this behind :-))<BR/><BR/>i need to sit and read this taking time..will do that in the afternoon. links, wikipedia -- all that would need time :-)<BR/><BR/>the life representations -- realistic, i would say...<BR/><BR/>wishes!<BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com