tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post6981636924841969271..comments2023-12-29T20:49:43.018-07:00Comments on masago-no-haiku: Renhai Reflections 62: Endeavouring FurtherMasagohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-14931857354122298402009-01-04T04:43:00.000-07:002009-01-04T04:43:00.000-07:00Great idea - and well executed. One of the most w...Great idea - and well executed. One of the most wonderful things about words is their versatility - how a single combination of letters and sounds can shift and change. Isn't language marvellous!jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-13701516521343408072008-12-31T19:31:00.000-07:002008-12-31T19:31:00.000-07:00Thank you all again, and Best Wishes in the New Ye...Thank you all again, and Best Wishes in the New Year.<BR/><BR/>Philip: Thanks for dropping by and the link to your hajku. I have had a chance to read a few of them, tre bone!Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-65160262287573258192008-12-31T08:19:00.000-07:002008-12-31T08:19:00.000-07:00Given your apparent interest in haiku, Esperanto, ...Given your apparent interest in haiku, Esperanto, and father-son writing, I thought you might be interested in a group of <A HREF="http://www.bierfaristo.com/hajkoj.php" REL="nofollow">Esperanto-language haiku</A> that I wrote with my brother.<BR/><BR/>And, thanks for your recent comment!<BR/><BR/>-- <BR/>Philip BrewerPhilip Brewerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00663794711442047499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-75018116950167066402008-12-30T13:15:00.000-07:002008-12-30T13:15:00.000-07:00still exploring new horizons, i see :)i like this ...still exploring new horizons, i see :)<BR/>i like this onepolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-50546857145874833862008-12-29T23:38:00.000-07:002008-12-29T23:38:00.000-07:00I like it! :)I like it! :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-14196178908763579112008-12-29T21:51:00.000-07:002008-12-29T21:51:00.000-07:00a father son renhai in the Christmas season, Tis t...a father son renhai in the Christmas season, Tis the season; Wonderful<BR/><BR/><BR/>much love<BR/>Merry Christmas<BR/> follow the 12 Days: a Christmas collaboration<BR/> http://myblog-lunchbreak.blogspot.com/<BR/> <BR/>much love<BR/>gillenaGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-8565300944150042992008-12-29T21:41:00.000-07:002008-12-29T21:41:00.000-07:00You seem to have all the fun seeing him try hard t...You seem to have all the fun seeing him try hard to catch his fish...than I thought....<BR/><BR/>anyway, Best wishes for the New Year!<BR/><BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-53849040737971037272008-12-29T19:50:00.000-07:002008-12-29T19:50:00.000-07:00Thank you all!Devika: a fishing lure: a hook with ...Thank you all!<BR/><BR/>Devika: a fishing lure: a hook with feathers that are attractive to the fish, recently bought and added to his box of fishing gear.<BR/><BR/>Janice: WOOt ...?<BR/><BR/>upinVermont: not intended to be a 'poem' or to be held together in the western sense...Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-83050819644960338972008-12-29T12:52:00.000-07:002008-12-29T12:52:00.000-07:00Nice to check back in. I've been pouring time into...Nice to check back in. I've been pouring time into my own blog.<BR/><BR/>An interesting experiment - not sure how successful it is as a 'poem' (in the western sense) - but then I'm not sure of the aesthetic goal behind some of the Renhai. Some hold together better than others. <BR/><BR/>This Renhai leaves me with no lingering resonance - seeming more for the wordplay.<BR/><BR/>Always a pleasure to read your efforts though...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-31411162333308825732008-12-29T10:56:00.000-07:002008-12-29T10:56:00.000-07:00like the flow of these.like the flow of these.get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-90961541233451030242008-12-29T09:52:00.000-07:002008-12-29T09:52:00.000-07:00A unique idea that works well within a Renhai stru...A unique idea that works well within a Renhai structure.<BR/><BR/>Word verification seems to agree: WOOt!Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-90860843692780270102008-12-29T01:59:00.000-07:002008-12-29T01:59:00.000-07:00a nice togethernessjohna nice togetherness<BR/>johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-44742718471616132542008-12-29T01:51:00.000-07:002008-12-29T01:51:00.000-07:00Pretty advanced stuff!:) Endeavouring further: tac...Pretty advanced stuff!:) Endeavouring further: tackling the subtleties of English!??:)Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-8962219544827588892008-12-28T23:43:00.000-07:002008-12-28T23:43:00.000-07:00Lure for the tackle box-- didn't get that, MasagoI...Lure for the tackle box-- didn't get that, Masago<BR/><BR/>I used to go fishing in my chidhood and we used to have small nets..<BR/><BR/>and the boys used to have poles...they catch one or two by the time we have a dozen :))<BR/><BR/>but, i found the pole interesting..especially to allure the fish with a prey and then pull back..sort of a fun there...poor fish!<BR/><BR/>wishes, <BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-52484851859776719092008-12-28T21:34:00.000-07:002008-12-28T21:34:00.000-07:00good idea -- there are so many more words0 that y...good idea -- there are so many more words0 that you could play with. just today I was teasing someone and I said sow seeds, sew clothes, ... and so what?Pamelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404943895800549273noreply@blogger.com