tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post8425104797113600362..comments2023-12-29T20:49:43.018-07:00Comments on masago-no-haiku: Renhai Reflections 21: As a FlockMasagohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-55036288433786044602008-10-08T19:35:00.000-06:002008-10-08T19:35:00.000-06:00Thank you all!Thank you all!Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-60935604253168828472008-10-08T01:40:00.000-06:002008-10-08T01:40:00.000-06:00Renhai reflections: Going back to school or school...Renhai reflections: Going back to school or school yard!?:)Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-67149619421718084142008-10-07T17:21:00.000-06:002008-10-07T17:21:00.000-06:00Leaves on the gust, a flock. >Is there anyone t...Leaves on the gust, a flock. <BR/>>Is there anyone that could not sense that -vision-?< Grand! _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-64384453241583268922008-10-07T11:15:00.000-06:002008-10-07T11:15:00.000-06:00A real narrative there...but then each stands alon...A real narrative there...<BR/>but then each stands alone well too...<BR/>Enjoyed both -- the full narrative and the seperate Renhais as well..<BR/><BR/>thanks Vaughn!<BR/>see again!<BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-63407516413061205922008-10-07T01:40:00.000-06:002008-10-07T01:40:00.000-06:00These are excellent! They really throw you into th...These are excellent! They really throw you into the scene. :OAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03223324219391300089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-91082670206726269882008-10-06T21:12:00.000-06:002008-10-06T21:12:00.000-06:00the first 3 lines are beautiful and stand alone .....the first 3 lines are beautiful and stand alone ...J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-6553312158738154422008-10-06T15:35:00.000-06:002008-10-06T15:35:00.000-06:00this one has a beautiful flow and a true autum fee...this one has a beautiful flow and a true autum feelpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-45809180458444388342008-10-06T11:31:00.000-06:002008-10-06T11:31:00.000-06:00beautiful. :Obeautiful. :OAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-36446921446838517282008-10-06T03:48:00.000-06:002008-10-06T03:48:00.000-06:00The narrative works well - you've painted a scene ...The narrative works well - you've painted a scene I feel I could climb into. But equally each part work in itself as per your renhai rules.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8126207.post-6465212445197965052008-10-06T02:03:00.000-06:002008-10-06T02:03:00.000-06:00excellent vaughnjohnexcellent vaughn<BR/>johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.com