masago-no-haiku

Renhai Reflections: Into The Twilight

2012-01-29T11:32:00.000-07:00

Into The Twilight

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

sound of the church bell —

a ragged homeless man walks

away from the bench /gc

a remote railroad crossing — /vs

sweet smell of burnt sugar cane /gc

observation deck —

is that the flight I just missed

that's now taking off? /vs

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Renhai Reflections: While You Were Sleeping

2012-01-22T21:31:00.000-07:00

While You Were Sleeping
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

soundly asleep —
effervescent bubbles
cleaning my dentures /jd

the rooster, a bit later /vs
a cup of steaming tea /jd

the morning news
from her iPad, the latest
on global tensions /vs

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Renhai Reflections: A New Stirring

2012-01-07T22:05:00.000-07:00

A New Stirring
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

a starless dawn sky
in stillness of night's ending
the moon smiles brightly /gc

snowflakes on the mall walk /gc
a little one waves to Dad /vs

the sweet tinkle
of crystal glasses as we
toast the New Year /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Day's End

2011-12-10T19:11:00.003-07:00

Day's End
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

all her trinkets stored
in the closed jewel box —
the music stops /gc

a wrench, bolts, and a spare tire /vs
the lamplight casting shadows /gc

second performance —
the understudy receives
a louder applause /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Left Behind

2011-12-04T16:42:00.001-07:00

Left Behind
A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

bits of black paint
on the rear left fender —
"sorry" note... /vs

lingering afternoon heat — /jd
ants on a Popsicle stick /vs

melted chocolate —
footprints leading to the door
cross a white carpet /jd

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Renhai Reflections: Katie Bar the Door

2011-11-12T22:09:00.000-07:00

Katie Bar the Door
A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

a beaver tail's slap...
another stick jammed into
the growing pile /vs

voices in the autumn night... /jd
the back door, did it get locked? /vs

the burglars
dump red juice on the photos —
a broken window /jd

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Renhai Reflections: Christmas a Coming

2011-11-06T19:33:00.001-07:00

Christmas a Coming
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

in silence blackbirds
skipping along the wall
peck at unseen food /gc

the parang songs have started — /gc
a toe keeps time to the beat /vs

under the covers
settling down for the night —
drip, drip-drip... /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Bluesy

2011-10-16T11:55:00.001-06:00

Bluesy
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

September —
stunning blue clouds give way
to yellow at sunset /gc

a crisp breeze this morning blows — /gc
bluejays chase one another /vs

chilled blueberries
with whipped cream topping —
summer memories /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Beyond the Reach

2011-09-10T21:44:00.000-06:00

Beyond the Reach
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

stepping into a bus —
I recognize the face, but
what is her name? /vs

the stone skips eight or nine times — /vs
a cat scampers up the tree /gc

bright moon —
the shadowy street under
dimly lit lamps /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Fast Reactions

2011-08-28T21:13:00.000-06:00

Fast Reactions
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Bursts of fireworks —
quick flashes illuminate
people in the crowd. /vs

In the night, cracks of thunder — /vs
her boyfriend storms out red-faced. /zh.r

Contemplating
a nudist Black-Sea beach —
your joke cracks me up. /zh.r

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Renhai Reflections: Some for All

2011-08-21T14:02:00.000-06:00

Some for All
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Rose bush —
two or three wilted among
the pink blossoms.

A hot sidewalk in August —
Bubble gum covered with ants.

The last mile
on the trail with the group,
my knee says, "stop!"

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Renhai Reflections: Our Life's Blooms

2011-08-14T20:42:00.000-06:00

Our Life's Blooms
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The rain
refreshes the garden —
the kids, barefoot. /zh.r

A mailbox, in jasmine blooms — /zh.r
dust rises above the road. /vs

Heading home
covered from head to toe —
he finds more mud. /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Night Tempo

2011-07-31T20:42:00.000-06:00

Night Tempo
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

swaying hips
to the mesmerizing strains ~
steelband concert /gc

a creaking sound in the night — /vs
cicadas thrill the forest /gc

crossed branches
groan in the strong wind —
crescent moon /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Silent Visit

2011-07-24T12:06:00.002-06:00

Silent Visit
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Leaned-out wall —
a poplar sapling peeks through
the window opening.

The top of a wooded hill —
abandoned farm buildings.

"1956"
marked into the stucco —
caved-in roof.

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Renhai Reflections: Under

2011-07-10T20:03:00.002-06:00

Under
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

One, two butterflies
flit blossom to blossom —
Rain forest.

Canopy of lilac blooms —
between bites, a sip of tea.

The sound of rain
on the umbrella, drops
form on the edge.

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Renhai Reflections: Advancing Further

2011-07-03T09:56:00.000-06:00

Advancing Further
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

clinched waistline
of the bachacs busy at
moving small sticks /gc

under a shady tree, benches — /gc
the bride's veil lifts in the breeze /vs

voices ring out,
a banner lifted high:
"Higher Wages!" /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Seen Through

2011-06-19T14:32:00.004-06:00

Seen Through
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

The popping begins
as the see-through pot lid
starts to steam up.

A Segway passes my way —
one head turns, then two.

I spill my soda
on the lap of the person
I step in front of.

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Correction: the middle verse should read, "A Segway passes...", see:
http://tinyurl.com/5t362yj

Renhai Reflections: The Outbreak

2011-06-05T11:53:00.006-06:00

The Outbreak
A Renhaibun by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

These lesions on my ankle from previous exposures to neutron beams are causing greater pain than they did yesterday. Now, today, my pace across this field of rubble is much slower... my work is hampered. And under these harrowing circumstances, I don't think I'll be able to take my scheduled holiday, two days off on planet Zoria playing cricket, unless I go AWOL from the consortium and get some first-aid. But suddenly, I'm pulled out of the depths of my self-commisseration... in a stumble my foot dislodges an unfamiliar object... I pick it up, turn it over, and recognize the worn logo of a vintage Syllacon. This was a primitive device used for storing information, communicating, and delivering medical remedies, among other things. I toss the worthless relic over my shoulder but to my amazement it begins to emit a coded signal. Picking it up I find the activator is still functional and a clearful image projects holographically in front of me. The image is accompanied by an audible feed which my modern hand device, which is actually a finger ring, translates into several stanzas of verse. The lines, according to my q-ring, are similar to an old earth-style poetical form.* The first stanza of this verse brings back that chilling, sacred sound that still reverberates in my memory... as if it summons me again, perhaps this time as a supplicant to the humble apothecary stall that stands adjacent to the temple. The next day I accept a "pass" from the consortium and stow away on board a rust-ridden, bulky galactic freighter.

*swinging the mallet
he sounds the jubilation
silver gong /vs

the shrill sound of an airoz — /jm
from the midst one arises /vs

a tall falconer
extends his gauntleted
arm in receipt /jm

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[This is a science fiction style Renhaibun (see the notes for more details)]

Renhai Reflections: Dashing By

2011-05-20T20:02:00.000-06:00

Dashing By
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A tattered flag
on the old wooden pole
flaps in the breeze.

A mouthed pinecone dashes by —
squirrel on the cedar fence.

The engineer waves
as the locomotive roars
out of the tunnel.

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Renhai Reflections: A Gift

2011-05-08T08:23:00.001-06:00

A Gift
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Big hugs with
tears of joy after months
of hard effort. /vs

The tiny sparrow leaves a gift — /vs
overhead a quick cloud burst. /jt

A chick hatches
on the twenty-second day
amid the feathers. /jt

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[This is a variation of renhai that has never been done before. See the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Tranquil Moments

2011-05-01T08:24:00.001-06:00

Tranquil Moments
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

bathtub filling —
the yellow duck bobs between
pink islands /vs

the river's swelling banks — /vs
cobalt consumes the night sky /gc

deepening sunrise —
the traffic pileup becomes
a giant snail march /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Feline Follies

2011-04-23T22:15:00.001-06:00

Feline Follies
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Can opener —
a purring, furry brush
against my leg. /vs

The pulled-back bed covers — /vs
the cat burrows deeper. /jt

"Nascar track" -
a paw under the couch swipes
the racing dog. /jt

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[This renhai is the sixth and final in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Ups and Downs

2011-04-16T21:45:00.001-06:00

Ups and Downs
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

First warm day —
his tongue round and round
an ice-cream cone. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
an icicle disappears. /jt

Riding up
toward Eiffel's top —
warm breeze. /vs

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[This renhai is the fifth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Hurry Scurry

2011-04-10T09:42:00.001-06:00

Hurry Scurry
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Breakfast dishes
remain on the table —
banana peels. /vs

The pulled-back bed covers - /vs
kimono half on the floor. /jt

Tax appointment —
on the hood of the car
my coffee cup. /jt

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[This renhai is the fourth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Softly a Tear

2011-03-31T19:58:00.002-06:00

Softly a Tear
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

a flower unfurls
yesterday's bud now blossomed —
the roosters' silence /gc

Japan's pain echoes throughout — /gc
the flag hoisted to haft-mast /vs

the sound of crickets —
opening her letter once more,
her words bring tears /vs

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[This is the first recorded renhai that used the Reverse Split method (see the notes for details).]

Renhai Reflections: Slowly, Surely

2011-03-26T21:51:00.002-06:00

Slowly, Surely
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

After ten minutes
I leave the tanning bed —
white-circled eyes. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
the roof soaks up the sun. /jt

I start to doze off
in the bubbling hot tub —
page twenty-five... /vs

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[This renhai is the third in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Recent Studio Renhai

2011-03-26T21:40:00.007-06:00

The following are a few recent Renhai that members of the Renhai Studio group have written (and appeared in a recent issue of the Sketchbook poetry journal):

At the Shrine
A Renhai by Dr. Vidur Jyoti (Solo), India
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0259.htm

The Merry-go-round
A Renhai by John Daleiden (Solo), USA
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0261.htm

Meltwater
A Renhai by Heike Gewi, Aden/Yemen and Walter Mathois, Vienna/Austria
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0262.htm

Renhai Reflections: Contrapuntal Harmonies

2011-03-19T22:02:00.000-06:00

Contrapuntal Harmonies
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Wet paint
on the cemetary gate —
rain and tears. /jm

A song ending the noon hour — /vs
the new digital carillon. /jm

The yellow cuckoo
makes his loud appearance,
tick-tock, tick-tock... /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Life's Rush

2011-03-10T19:24:00.001-07:00

Life's Rush
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

At the interview
I pull my skirt down an inch —
the watch alarm rings. /jt

The pulled-back bed covers — /vs
things-to-do page left open. /jt

Waiting for her
in Chapters, I leaf through
a gadget magazine. /vs

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[This renhai is the second in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Well Done

2011-03-05T21:37:00.000-07:00

Well Done
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

the weekend party —
I exchange views with the town's
theatre critic /vs

the aroma of white tea — /gc
words of Dickens between sips /vs

shy the applause —
rises to a tremendous
standing ovation /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Flashback

2011-02-26T22:02:00.000-07:00

Flashback
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Scotch on the rocks —
the slow cruise last summer
up to Alaska. /vs

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
another laugh line appears. /jt

His arms around her
as they ferry cross the lake —
yesterday's sun-dog. /jt

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Renhai Reflections: Recharged

2011-02-19T21:16:00.000-07:00

Recharged
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Refilled glass
of aromatic malbec —
their own reflections. /vs

A waft of fermenting fruit — /jm
recycling depot line up. /vs

Winery chateau —
a senior couple practice
the wedding march. /jm

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Renhai Reflections: Sky's the Limit

2011-02-13T21:36:00.002-07:00

Sky's the Limit
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

In-flight meal —
I trade my rice pudding
for her cheese cake.

Distant skyscraper crane —
chilly morning sunrise.

As a silhouette,
one elm's tangled branches
against another's.

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Renhai Reflections: Recent Studio Renhai

2011-02-07T06:54:00.006-07:00

The following are a few recent Renhai that members of the Renhai Studio group have written (and appeared in a recent issue of the Sketchbook poetry journal):

cold spell
A Renhai by Heike Gewi, Aden/Yemen and Walter Mathois, Vienna/Austria
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0250.htm

New Beginnings
A Renhai by John Daleiden (Solo), USA
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0252.htm

Renhai Reflections: Squirms And Scratches

2011-01-30T19:17:00.000-07:00

Squirms And Scratches
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

the old jalopy
skids into the interchange —
balding tires... /vs

he squirms in the barber's chair — /vs
'skin head' makes the soccer team /gc

during the 'cat fight'
smart watchers keep their distance —
a dishevelled wig /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Breaking Comfort

2011-01-22T20:38:00.000-07:00

Breaking Comfort
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)

The young operator
flicks a cigarette butt
into the traffic. /jm

Tire tracks in the fresh snow — /vs
a grader's exhaust plume. /jm

I spread honey
on the scraped burned toast —
steaming coffee. /vs

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Renhai Reflections: There, Here

2011-01-09T20:48:00.000-07:00

There, Here
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Saying "Hi"
to this and that friend,
spilling her popcorn.

Sparrows flit limb to limb,
flicking snow off each branch.

He changes lines,
exchanges glances with
the grocery clerk.

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Renhai Reflections: One Winter Evening

2011-01-04T21:55:00.001-07:00

One Winter Evening
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Along the road —
the clump of fresh snow
turns into a rabbit. /vs

A full lunar eclipse — /vs
coyotes snuggle closer. /jt

In the tavern
hot ale and a blazing fire —
Welsh rarebit. /jt

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Renhai Reflections: Jolly, Folly Times

2010-12-28T11:57:00.000-07:00

Jolly, Folly Times
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

He falls asleep
after hours of writing cards...
the pen, on "Merry." /zh.r

One-armed gingerbread man — /vs
Jack Frost on the window pane. /zh.r

Candy cane —
the crook peeks out from
his coat pocket. /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Cookie Dough And Tinsel

2010-12-19T15:18:00.000-07:00

Cookie Dough And Tinsel
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Christmas gifts
with bows and red ribbons,
wrapped and hidden /vs

a fresh batch of poppycock /vs
another rap on the door /gc

paranderos
their frilly shirts ruffling
with their music /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Filling My Dreams

2010-12-12T19:12:00.000-07:00

Filling My Dreams
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

an old stocking
boxed in with last years baubles
dusted and gilded /gc

under this starless sky — /vs
chilly breezes through bare trees /gc

the last of the kids
move out, just the memories
to run through my mind /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Sense Encounters

2010-12-02T21:36:00.001-07:00

Sense Encounters
A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The rodeo clown
grimaces as he runs
toward a barrel. /vs

Amber, here and there — /tk
smudged mascara in her tears. /vs

Fallen leaves —
footstep sounds evoke
childhood memories. /tk

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[This is the last in a four-part series, see the notes for details]

Renhai Reflections: A Bit Extra

2010-11-27T16:53:00.000-07:00

A Bit Extra
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Crowded pizza place —
the deep dish special arrives
with extra peppers. /vs

Thin ice covers the pond — /zh.r
sparrows at the bird feeder. /vs

A thick bed blanket
in this well-heated room —
alone in the lodge. /zh.r

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Renhai Reflections: Holding On

2010-11-20T20:58:00.000-07:00

Holding On
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

the old homestead —
weathered planks of the roof
now caved-in /vs

cut flowers at the graveside — /gc
fallen tears begin to dry /vs

her wrinkled hands
stir another batch of cookies ...
smiling grand kids /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Closer to an End

2010-11-14T11:55:00.000-07:00

Closer to an End
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Bit by bit
the jet trail above begins
to break up.

A skiff of frost on the lawn —
flies inside move slower.

A weathered plank
among tiny ice islands —
the gentle flow.

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Renhai Reflections: Introduction

2010-11-10T19:34:00.000-07:00

Introduction
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

one kingfisher
on the tallest tree for miles —
the river's faint rush /vs

a single white sandpiper — /vs
the tide ebbs so quietly /gc

whitewashed
city pavement edges —
British royal visit /gc

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Renhai Reflections: Some Recent Renhai

2010-11-04T07:28:00.001-06:00

The following are a few recent Renhai that members of the Renhai Studio Group have written:

hum
A Renhai by Heike Gewi & Walter Mathois
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0239.htm

Waiting for an Answer
A Renhai by John Daleiden (Solo)
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0240.htm

Life, Liberty, & the Pursuit of Happiness...
A Renhai by John Daleiden (Solo)
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0241.htm

Changlings
A Renhai by John Daleiden & Janice Thomson
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0242.htm

Renhai Reflections: Concealing Nooks

2010-10-03T21:04:00.000-06:00

Concealing Nooks
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The toddler's smile
Reveals a thick layer
of ice-cream. /vs

Glistening slug's trail — /jm
overhanging rhubarb leaves. /vs

A torn box
by the open pantry door —
cookie crumbs. /jm

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Renhai Reflections: A Measure

2010-09-25T20:57:00.002-06:00

A Measure
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Veterans chat
outside the grocery store —
boxes of poppies. /jt

A cluster of large mushrooms — /vs
the World War ll movie ends. /jt

Military funeral —
the General's badges hang
a little heavier. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0237.htm

Renhai Reflections: Familiar Smells

2010-09-12T20:48:00.000-06:00

Familiar Smells
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

I peek out the tent...
in the dark by the garbage,
two shiny eyes. /vs

In the flowers, an odour... /jt
the mutt charges in. /vs

Early morning —
striped figures skulking past
dew-laden roses. /jt

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0236.htm

Renhai Reflections: Let the Fun Begin

2010-09-05T16:01:00.000-06:00

Let the Fun Begin
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

cheerleader's pompoms
entering the stadium
a line of traffic /gc

popcorn smells from the kitchen — /vs
the puppy's tail a-wagging /gc

a beach-side resort —
shaved ice cone in one hand,
hot-dog in the other /vs

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Renhai Reflections: Odd Commonality

2010-08-15T15:33:00.002-06:00

Odd Commonality
A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Worried looks
on the faces in the crowd —
Thunderhead. /tk

Late-night video at home... /vs
An eye peeps from the wall's hole. /tk

Seven-hour flight —
I put on my brave face
after the turbulence. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0234.htm

Renhai Reflections: A Winner Emerges

2010-07-18T12:53:00.001-06:00

A Winner Emerges
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Some neighbourhood boys
join in for their world-cup match —
the ball, off a head. /vs

One, two, then three pigeons land — /vs
flying home, team Germany. /gc

Cooing from the eaves —
the TV screen filled with
Soccer City. /gc

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0233.htm

Renhai Reflections 188: Making the Grade

2010-07-11T20:24:00.001-06:00

Making the Grade
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A puff of smoke
occasionally wafts past
the open window.

Steam railway excursion —
a fly on the wooden seat.

Late afternoon —
the shadow of the cars dance
on the passing field.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0232.htm

Renhai Reflections 187: Scents of Purpose

2010-06-29T19:17:00.002-06:00

Scents of Purpose
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

A sod-bound rose
bends at the tightening twine —
blindman's yard. /jm

The string quartet arrives — /jm
berries & lilacs on each table. /vs

The blind-folded archer
pulls back a long arrow —
wobbling apple. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0231.htm

Renhai Reflections 186: Emerging Contrasts

2010-06-20T07:43:00.001-06:00

Emerging Contrasts
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Toshiaki Koike (tk)

a newcomer arrives —
magpies in the trees
begin to, "ga ga..." /tk

red tulips among the weeds — /vs
early spring gale /tk

forest sunrise —
a slug slithers deeper
under the leaves /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0230.htm

[This is the second in a seasonal series, see notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections 185: Step Forward

2010-06-11T20:16:00.000-06:00

Step Forward
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

rainflies shedding wings —
at the slightest touch they move
on to the next stage. /gc

mosquitoes sing at sunset /gc
pounding rain hits the tin roof /vs

windshield wiper blades —
a bit of each bug set free
in each swipe's quick pass /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0229.htm

[See notes for info about rainflies.]

Renhai Reflections 184: On the Loose

2010-05-31T19:39:00.000-06:00

On the Loose
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Poplar fuzz
fills the sky... drifting
on the ground.

Cherry petals face the wind —
the garden path grows pinker.

Open pickup —
pieces of carpet fly out
on the road.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0228.htm

[See notes for info about poplar fuzz.]

Renhai Reflections 183: Within, Without

2010-05-16T13:23:00.003-06:00

Within, Without
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

kitchen sink —
the bowl floats within
a submerged pot. /jm

inch of rain in the dog dish — /jm
the mailbox, overflowing... /vs

sea floor oil leak —
the lowered containment vessel
plugs with ice /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0227.htm

[See notes for info about the oil leak reference in verse 3.]

Renhai Reflections 182: Concurrent

2010-05-07T19:10:00.001-06:00

Concurrent
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

the old shopkeeper
bagging a purchase; he greets
a new customer /gc

between the calls of a finch /vs
the street-sweeper sneezes, dawn /gc

the haunting echo
of a hidden distant loon...
I pass our lunch pack /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0226.htm

Renhai Reflections 181: Limit Encounters

2010-04-25T12:03:00.000-06:00

Limit Encounters
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)

From the edge
a fly descends into
the peanut butter. /vs

Cycling the canyon rim — /jm
a squirrel crosses the bridge. /vs

The clothes line
naked but for three pins —
landing finch. /jm

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0225.htm

Renhai Reflections 180: Dispatching

2010-04-08T20:59:00.000-06:00

Dispatching
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The shovel's crunch
sends mice scurrying
out of their nests. /jm

A sudden rythymic whooshing... /jm&vs
the honk of low-flying geese. /vs&jm

A first warming day,
the song of their return...
not in sight. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0223.htm

Renhai Reflections 179: Faintly Conducted

2010-03-28T10:52:00.001-06:00

Faintly Conducted
A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

river park
wearing a snow hood
muted hush... /tk

raising his dark shades... /vs
somewhere, faint breathing /tk

March wedding...
this moment before the groom
lifts the veil /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0222.htm

[Check the notes for special comments about this Renhai's theme(s).]

Renhai Reflections 178: Had Been May Be

2010-03-20T21:29:00.001-06:00

Had Been May Be
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A dried pinecone
where the last patch
of snow had been.

The cat scratches in the bed —
a breeze lifts an old flyer.

Sorting through
his old knick-knack box —
corncob pipe.

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Renhai Reflections 177: Night Cruise

2010-03-16T20:45:00.001-06:00

Night Cruise
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

under full sail
a sudden swell tosses me
from rail to rail /vs

moonlit coconut palms /vs
bash of foamy white breakers /gc

canopy of stars
which one will this night
pitch me a wish /gc

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0220.htm

Renhai Reflections 176: Voice

2010-03-12T18:40:00.001-07:00

Voices
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Hidden ledges
above the building entrance —
pigeon cooings. /jm

Pre-dawn police chopper — /jm
she parts the bedroom blinds. /vs

Listening lip-reader —
the mumbled words come through
a shaggy moustache. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0219.htm

Renhai Reflections 175: Finding a Way

2010-03-07T07:34:00.000-07:00

Finding a Way
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

The melting trickle
has become a river across
the front sidewalk.

Leaning snow shovel —
a skiff of frost glistens.

Over the pond
an extended branch drops
its last leaf.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0218.htm

Renhai Reflections 174: The Thin Line

2010-03-01T19:19:00.003-07:00

The Thin Line
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

At the school
a child raises a flag —
the sound of singing. /jd

Two standing soldiers /vs
a broken rose blossom. /jd

Sugar plum fairy
dancing — her music box
winds down. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0217.htm

[This is the second dual language Renhai (English/Esperanto) that John and I did together.]

Renhai Reflections 173: Valentine Blues

2010-02-24T18:46:00.000-07:00

Valentine Blues
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

the blue of two
tanagers enmeshed in
the caricature bush /gc

the phone laid on its cradle /gc
roses nestled in tissue /vs

a letter arrives
with your golden lock
intimate melody /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0216.htm

[And one final valentines renhai.]

Renhai Reflections 172: Waves of Love

2010-02-20T21:18:00.001-07:00

Waves of Love
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Deployed abroad —
on St. Valentine's Day,
his roses. /zh.r

A breeze sways the curtain — /vs
my darling's whispering lips.... /zh.r

The faint rush
of distant waves — longing
to hold you tight. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0215.htm

[Yet another Valentine's renhai.]

Renhai Reflections 171: Cupid's Aim

2010-02-17T19:39:00.002-07:00

Cupid's Aim
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

so long ago...
in a bed of red roses
that first kiss /bk

his and mine carved in a heart... /bk
our walk together, a dream? /vs

yet now to feel
your warm embrace, and touch
each soft lip... /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0214.htm

[Several of us wrote renhai for Valentine's Day. Here is another written with Betty Kaplan.]

Renhai Reflections 170: Rippling Petals

2010-02-13T21:29:00.002-07:00

Rippling Petals
A Renhai by Janice Seward (js) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Together again —
overwhelmed by ripples
of pure joy. /js

Gentle waves in the pond /js
reflect in your eyes. /vs

Floating rose petals,
each one carrying a message
from my heart. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0213.htm

[A Valentine's renhai with my wife, Janice...]

Renhai Reflections 169: Layers

2010-02-10T19:43:00.001-07:00

Layers
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

A small break in the clouds —
wolves bay at a full moon.

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0212.htm

[Thanks to Bill and Devika for the choice of title, "Layers".]

Renhai Reflections 168: A Renhai, Step by Step: Title

2010-02-09T11:19:00.001-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: Title
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

A small break in the clouds —
wolves bay at a full moon.

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

From the beginning, with one or two exceptions, we have always added titles to our renhai. It is usually something that adds a little hint about the theme or sub-theme or suggests some extra little angle in the reading. When collaborating there is commonly some brainstorming and then the best title is agreed upon by consensus.

Here are some thoughts I have:

-Wisps of Crisp Air
-Wisps of Crispness
-Crisp Wisps
-Between Layers
-Under Layers
-Cracked Open
-Frigid Reposing
...?

Perhaps you have some preferences or other ideas. Tomorrow we'll choose something and complete this renhai!

Renhai Reflections 167: A Renhai, Step by Step: Completed Middle

2010-02-07T22:58:00.002-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: Completed Middle
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

The link to the third verse could be one of many possibilities. I am struck by the first word, "howling" in "Howling north wind", and immediately I see the image of wolves baying at the moon:

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

A small break in the clouds —
wolves bay at a full moon.

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

With the wolves baying at the moon, which by implication is appearing through the break in the clouds, there is as sense of being underneath, below... a kind of sheltering, a feeling which appears in each verse. This is therefore a secondary theme.

Next, and finally, a title...

Renhai Reflections 166: A Renhai, Step by Step: First of the Middle

2010-02-06T20:09:00.005-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: First of the Middle
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

So far we have the following:

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

[middle, line 1]
[middle, line 2]

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

With the reverse process the next step is to write a middle line that references a theme and links to one (or both) of the other verses. With the storm in the first verse and howling wind in the third, I am inclined to extend this weather-related feeling in the middle verse and go with that as the theme.

For the linking, I think of the creek in the first verse... what if that image is reflected in the sky where weather seems to originate?... perhaps something like the following where the break in the clouds appears as the creek "breaks" the terrain it flows through:

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

A small break in the clouds —
[middle, line 2]

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

Now, the other middle line...

Renhai Reflections 165: A Renhai, Step by Step: Another verse

2010-02-04T20:18:00.003-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: Another verse
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

Possible links:
-Snow, storm, whiteness.
-Layering, flatness.
-Velvet, type of fabric.
-Body of water, aquatic (frozen).
-Channel, line.
-Bed, peacefulness.

From this list I am impressed by the idea of the snow storm and the frozen creek lying silently, perhaps not so warmly, under the pure untouched, newly fallen blanket of snow. In a flash of inspiration this verse emerges:

Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.

The links are therefore:
-Covered, sheltered.
-Snow storm / North wind.
-Cloth, material (Velvet / Sheets).
-Bed.

Now, on to the middle lines...

Renhai Reflections 164: A Renhai, Step by Step: Some Linking

2010-02-03T19:30:00.003-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: Some Linking
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

I just now notice that I used word "snow" twice (in the first and second lines). We could change the first line to something like "A passing blizzard's". Or, the second line can be changed to something like, "layer of white velvet". Let's go with that. If you see something better, please leave a comment. So we have:

A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.

The next step is to write the other 3-line verse, which sandwiches the middle 2-line verse. There are a few ways to do this but for this Renhai let's look at some possible links (and we'll let the theme emerge on it's own). Here are some possible links that come to mind (maybe you can see others):

-Snow, storm, whiteness.
-Layering, flatness.
-Velvet, type of fabric.
-Body of water, aquatic (frozen).
-Channel, line.
-Bed, peacefulness.

The next step is playing with these links and discovering another verse that fits. Please stand by...

Renhai Reflections 163: A Renhai, Step by Step: Inspiration

2010-02-02T07:26:00.004-07:00

A Renhai, Step by Step: Inspiration
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

For something a little different, in the next few days, I plan to reveal a solo renhai I have been working and do so step by step.

The inspiration for this Renhai begins in the middle of the night as a picture, an image, in my sleepy mind. The image emerges as this 3-line haiku:

A snow storm's
layer of velvet snow —
creek bed.

The forward Renhai process starts with the middle verse and works outward to the other verses. This haiku image, however, starts us off in the reverse direction and will either end up being the first or the third verse. More to come in the next day or two...

Renhai Reflections 162: Unseen Fauxes

2010-01-28T19:08:00.001-07:00

Unseen Fauxes
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Winter warm snap —
even the fashion mannequins
without hair.

A laundry day's pile, somewhere
her paper doll's blouse.

Afternoon rays —
a tip of the scarecrow's head
begins to appear.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0211.htm

Renhai Reflections 161: Unsilence

2010-01-21T19:30:00.001-07:00

Unsilence
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

New year bonfire —
whistles from the tangled
poplar brush pile. /jm

A red-headed woodpecker — /jm
chop-chop, chop-chop, chop... /vs

Hot words and spittle
spew through the old man's
gray beard. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0209.htm

Renhai Reflections 160: Oblivious

2010-01-17T19:26:00.002-07:00

Oblivious
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

A dog barks
without interruption —
ants cross the road. /jd

Two standing soldiers — /vs
children play in the wreckage. /jd

Gridlock traffic —
the bicycle we passed before
is now ahead. /vs

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[We wrote this Renhai as a dual-language collaborative effort, see the notes for details]

Renhai Reflections 159: Critter Crossings

2010-01-13T20:31:00.001-07:00

Critter Crossings
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A fishing line
through the ice hole...
was that a ripple?

A foot encounters the dog
begging under the table.

A neighbourhood kid
comes to the door, in hand
a kitten to give.

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Renhai Reflections 158: Out Shining

2010-01-07T19:46:00.006-07:00

Out Shining
A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

High beams
stab into ice fog —
Passing car. /tk

Through an ice sculpture, /vs
falling long shadows. /tk

Festive lights —
he raises the last set
with a broom. /vs

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[A Merry Orthodox Christmas to all!]

Renhai Reflections 157: A New Year Reflection

2010-01-03T19:33:00.000-07:00

A New Year Reflection
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

A old friend
from twenty years ago
his forehead, larger.

Morning glance in the mirror —
finding hair in new places.

School yearbook...
I'm in a club I don't
recall joining.

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Renhai Reflections 156: Come & Gone

2009-12-29T20:25:00.001-07:00

Come & Gone
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Seeds and husks
scattered below an empty
bird feeder.

Hanging morning ice fog —
tiny critter prints.

Post-brunch table —
left behind, an opened box
of animal crackers.

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0201.htm

Renhai Reflections 155: Rendering Service

2009-12-23T08:32:00.000-07:00

Rendering Service
A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Hand to bottom —
after ten hours, a new cry
comes to life. /vs

Waiting for the doctor — /jd
framed veterinary degree. /vs

On my jawbone
the vibrations of a drill —
a gold filling /jd

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Renhai Reflections 154: Latter Moments

2009-12-20T20:51:00.000-07:00

Latter Moments
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Christmas Eve —
from shop to shop between
singing carols. /jt

Juggling street busker — /vs
a hot-dog cart moves nearer. /jt

Paying the bills —
another month closer
to retirement. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 153: Between

2009-12-16T19:19:00.002-07:00

Between
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Snowy pines —
the squirrel again finds
his pine cones.

Two standing soldiers —
cigarette burning down.

Grocery line —
for the coming week,
provisions in hand.

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[This Renhai was written in Esperanto and translated into English (see the notes for the Esperanto version). It was also an experiment in a new approach to writing renhai. That is, each verse was written without concern for a theme, only about the links between each verse. With the linking itself, the focus was at the emotional level and less at the object or intellectual level. As it turned out, a theme emerged all on its own.]

Renhai Reflections 152: Drained

2009-12-12T18:25:00.001-07:00

Drained
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Closure notice —
in the shower stalls
silent echoes. /jt

Seagull on the board's tip — /vs
goggles at the drain pipe. /jt

Looking down
into the last few drops —
paper cup. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 151: Beyond the Pale

2009-12-07T19:18:00.001-07:00

Beyond the Pale
A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Torn wallpaper
dangling in the breeze —
abandoned building. /jd

Desert winter blossoms - /jd
snake skin shed between spokes. /vs

Derelict bomber -
all but the engine between
stony outcroppings. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 150: Uncommon Canvas

2009-12-05T19:27:00.000-07:00

Uncommon Canvas
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Leaves afloat —
the neighbor's tires
splashed with red. /jt

Chilly rains melt the garden — /jt
kitten tracks across the hood. /vs

Crayoned scenes
blend with safari photos —
fridge magnets. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 149: Continuing On

2009-12-02T16:57:00.001-07:00

Continuing On
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

The sports car
screeches past the others —
changing red...

Branch of laden mountain ash —
a blue jay glides downward.

Crash of pins —
the black ball rolls through,
dropping behind.

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Renhai Reflections 148: Sightings

2009-11-29T15:04:00.007-07:00

Sightings
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Slivers of sunlight
fracture the dense stillness
deep in the forest. /jt

The half-moon dots a tower /vs
as a crow pecks his shadow. /jt

The glinting harpoon
fired from the sofa's bow
pierces the surface. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0187.htm

[This Renhai was written using a Google Wave (wave.google.com).]

Renhai Reflections 147: Stepping Back

2009-11-21T19:07:00.000-07:00

Stepping Back
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)

A waning crescent
in the long dim corridor —
shuffling footfalls. /vj

Barber's shop window — /vs
a glance back in time. /vj

Shoe-shiner's chair —
on the tip of my shoe,
the overhead light. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 146: On the Way

2009-11-16T18:56:00.000-07:00

On the Way
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Slowly letting go —
the greeting card slips into
the tiny slot /gc

Two friends embrace in the street, /gc
their puppies tangle leashes. /vs

Fish food sprinkles —
the guppies dart up to meet
the sinking bits. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 145: Awakening Talent

2009-11-04T18:40:00.001-07:00

Awakening Talent
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

School buzzer —
I'm the last one left
to leave the room. /vs

In a semi dream state, /gc
I hit the snooze button. /vs

Chalk on the black board
taking a line for a long walk —
creative art class. /gc

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[Be sure to read the notes for comments about the third verse.]

Renhai Reflections 144: Junior Achievement

2009-10-28T19:20:00.001-06:00

Junior Achievement
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Seward (js)

Baby steps —
hands above the head,
lifted high. /vs & js

Little fingers at the keys — /vs & js
coloured sticky on the page. /vs & js

School theatre —
each student steps forward
for the encore bow. /vs & js

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Renhai Reflections 143: Onward

2009-10-21T20:10:00.001-06:00

Onward
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Leaving a trail
of joyous songs behind —
the bride's veil /gc

Two at the breakfast table — /vs
last night's left overs, day moon. /gc

Cruise ship deck —
a pair of seagulls follow
above the wake. /vs

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Renhai Reflections 142: Settling Down

2009-10-11T11:32:00.003-06:00

Settling Down
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Seward (js)

Quiet playground —
an autumn breeze upon
the set of swings. /js

Between bicycle spokes, /vs
a scarlet maple leaf. /js

Caught in traffic —
switching stations to look
for better news. /vs

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[This Renhai was the first written with my wife Janice.]