2006-07-04

709. Post Repast

a bamboo toothpick
between thumb and a finger
after-dinner chat

[This unintentionally turned out to have a 5-7-5 syllable format]
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5 comments:

  1. floots1:18 PM, July 05, 2006

    nice picture
    (i often use 5-7-5 out of habit after years of using it as a part of teaching 11 year olds about syllables and scansion etc)

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  2. polona2:55 PM, July 05, 2006

    very nice. 5-7-5 can work well if not forced...

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  3. Masago10:36 PM, July 05, 2006

    j: Thanks.

    floots: Thanks. Yes, once-in-awhile I write a 5-7-5 without intention. I look forward to reading some of yours on your blog. :-)

    polona: Thanks, I agree. I may have written more of them as I'm not always counting syllables to notice. :-)

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  4. Pat Paulk6:22 AM, July 06, 2006

    Well captured Vaughn! 5-7-5 or not!

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  5. Masago10:31 PM, July 06, 2006

    pat: Thanks mucho, my friend!

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