I can really relate to this one -- there is a vacant, junk-filled lot right next door to my apartment building. Soft drink cans (aka pop cans) regularly go on little journeys across the lot in the wind.
They always seem to make such a lonely, empty sound as they roll ...
karasu: Thanks...Sometimes a storm wind wind energizes more that soft drink cans...e.g. I originally wrote this as a bucket clanging across a farm yard.
pat: Take cover! Thanks pat.
floots: Thats for sure...the litter of litter. :-)
From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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It was worth waiting for Vaughn.
I can really relate to this one -- there is a vacant, junk-filled lot right next door to my apartment building. Soft drink cans (aka pop cans) regularly go on little journeys across the lot in the wind.
They always seem to make such a lonely, empty sound as they roll ...
When the pop cans roll it's time to go! Good one Vaughn!!
ubiquitous drinks cans
not as attractive as robins
but i'm sure they breed as fast :)
well done again, vaughn!
(cans and vacant lots really seem to be the same everywhere)
aurora: Thank you.
karasu: Thanks...Sometimes a storm wind wind energizes more that soft drink cans...e.g. I originally wrote this as a bucket clanging across a farm yard.
pat: Take cover! Thanks pat.
floots: Thats for sure...the litter of litter. :-)
polona: Yep, thanks polona.
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