2006-08-22

758. Gift from Above

under the bridge...
a pigeon feather twirls
to the ground

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8 comments:

  1. Does it fall as fast as a stone? Does it land as hard? I don't know what that means, but it made me think. Love it!!

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  2. This haiku is as soft and delicate as the image it portrays Masago. Thank you.

    PS: Can't log in to your comments page with my beta Blogger account (darn), so I am logging in here as "other". Alas, my picture will not grace your comments page. ;-)

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  3. frailty
    wanderlust
    happenstance
    all hidden in a few words
    nice one

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  4. Do pigeon feathers have pigeons? Great moment.

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  5. Pat: Ah, deep questions...glad to have spurred the ponder. Thanks.

    Karasu: Thank you for your kind words. Hopefully the beta thing will be ironed-out soon.

    Floots: Thanks, you've verbalized its character and identified aspects I hadn't considered.

    Polona: Thank you.

    Bill: Interesting thought. Thanks.

    Tim: Thank you, mate!

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  6. Ssnneeeeeze!
    Just allergy,
    or Bird flu?

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  7. Tikkus: Hmmm...good question!

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