2007-09-24

Rengay Through the Seasons #4 [1-2]

by Karina Klesko (kk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay 4, Verses 1-2 (of 6):

Autumn afternoon — rose petals cling / to the cemetery gate. /kk
Embracing at the door... an ebony hair on his shirt. /vs

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:16 PM, September 24, 2007

    Fantastic start! (Although I have to tell you that when I saw your initials, "vs", "Victoria's Secret" immediately came to mind. :) )

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  2. J. Andrew Lockhart9:52 PM, September 24, 2007

    good lines -- I'm laughing about Aurora's comment! :)

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  3. floots11:52 PM, September 24, 2007

    a nice sense of intimacy developing

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  4. Borut12:13 AM, September 25, 2007

    Good. ... I'm turning into a tree expert...!?:)

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  5. John McDonald2:11 AM, September 25, 2007

    looks good
    john

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  6. polona1:10 PM, September 25, 2007

    things are heating up :)

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  7. Masago8:02 PM, September 25, 2007

    Aurora: *LOL*

    Andrew: :-)

    Floots: We'll see... :-)

    Borut: *Hee, hee*

    John: Thanks.

    Polona: Yep... :-)

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