by Masago: Rengay #20 (Jan 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 5)
Snowflakes / on a branch... it dips / a bit more.
Family dinner — garlic salt / on a stick of celery.
Athletic club — another gulp before / pressing thirty.
Siphoned gas — on the way back the can / grows heavier.
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that's as good a representation of conscience as i'v ever read
ReplyDeletenice one vaughn
Physical work? I'm not good at it... But I'll work it out!?:)
ReplyDeleteDitto Floots.
ReplyDeletei like it although i can't explain why.
ReplyDeleteFloots: You've again spotted a deeper insight. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteBorut: Ha, ha!
John: Thanks.
Aurora: Thank you.
Polona: Your kind words are encouraging. Thanks.