by Toshiaki Koike (tk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #21 (Jan 20-26, 2008) Verses 1-4 (of 6):
Icy Road — a plastic bag rolls, right, left. /tk
A tangled cassette tape — an end flaps in the chill. /vs
Revolving door — cold and warm air / briefly touch. /tk
Frost patterns / form on the window pane — finger print. /vs
[When someone leaves a finger print on a window (e.g. house, car), the frost when it gets quite cold out will form a pattern that reveals the finger print that was previously invisible.]
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that captures coldness so well!
ReplyDeletei'm really enjoying the sense of transience and permanence captured in these pieces
ReplyDeletethank you both
Oh, didn't know that. No 'ice flowers' as we call them, on window panes this year... Just dark blue pansies in the garden...!?:)
ReplyDeletevery good
ReplyDeletejohn
who's the culprit? ;-)
ReplyDeleteit was a pleasure to read this rengay!
ReplyDeleteAndrew: Thank you.
ReplyDeleteFloots: Thanks.
Borut: :-) ...or maybe you're wearing the grin.
John: Thanks.
Polona: Hmmm, better call on Scotland yard. :-)
Haiku-Shelf: Thank you.