by Toshiaki Koike (tk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #21 (Jan 20-26, 2008) Verses 1-5 (of 6):
Icy Road — a plastic bag rolls, right, left. /tk
A tangled cassette tape — an end flaps in the chill. /vs
Revolving door — cold and warm air / briefly touch. /tk
Frost patterns / form on the window pane — finger print. /vs
A single glove — fingers / point toward the exit. /tk
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
interesting add-on
ReplyDeleteso many messages in objets trouves
ReplyDeleteloving it
I'm all for exiting Winter!!
ReplyDeletethe lost one or the remaining one?
ReplyDeleteanyway, like it.
Andrew: Thanks.
ReplyDeleteFloots: Indeed, et ignoré..
John: Thanks.
Pat: ...wait for it... (at least up here). :-)
Polona: Ah, an interesting ambiguity... actually, Toshiaki had the lost one in mind. Thanks.