2008-02-04

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-2]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:29 PM, February 04, 2008

    Nice progression. :)

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  2. Borut1:16 AM, February 05, 2008

    Another revelation or two, and we'll see...!?:)

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  3. John McDonald2:04 AM, February 05, 2008

    tense
    john

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  4. floots2:24 AM, February 05, 2008

    a very special moment
    thank you

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  5. Pat Paulk6:45 AM, February 05, 2008

    Can never stay hidden, something/someone always exposes us. Love it!!

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  6. polona11:52 AM, February 05, 2008

    ah, the anticipation... lovely!

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  7. Ričardas2:16 PM, February 05, 2008

    let them free :) nice pieces

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  8. Masago6:56 PM, February 05, 2008

    Aurora: Thanks.

    Borut: :-)

    John: Thanks.

    Floots: Thank You.

    Pat: That's for sure. Thanks.

    Polona: Thanks.

    Ričardas: Thank you.

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