2008-02-07

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.
Her friend holds / the half-spud... the needle's tip / sinks through.
A snowboarder plows under — his partner offers his hand.

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous7:26 PM, February 07, 2008

    I like anything with snow in it. :)

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  2. Borut1:19 AM, February 08, 2008

    A friend in need is a friend indeed.:)

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  3. J. Andrew Lockhart8:57 AM, February 08, 2008

    brrrrr!

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  4. floots9:49 AM, February 08, 2008

    lot of pain and pleasure in these last two
    (no piercings for me) :)

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  5. polona1:23 PM, February 08, 2008

    no damage done, i hope

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  6. Masago5:02 PM, February 08, 2008

    Aurora: Me too. :-)

    Borut: For sure (especially if you're on the receiving end).

    Andrew: :-)

    Floots: Thanks (me too).

    Polona: I don't think so.

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