by Jon Davey (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #26 (Feb 24 - Mar 1, 2008) Verse 1 (of 6):
Hail storm — sparrow and sparrowhawk / sheltered in a blackthorn. /jd
This rengay was written with Jon Davey who was born in Redruth, England. He gained a degree in English and European Thought & Literature from the Cambridge College of Art and Technology and later became a primary school teacher in Camborne, Cornwall. Jon is now living in a converted barn in the small village of Brea with partner Philippa and family. Jon began writing haiku in the early 1980's.
Masago and Jon were partners in a couple of Off-the-Wall Rengay exercises in July, 2007:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uDqqFJHbSF9aA
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uDWTQXn2hE0EA
[Off-the-Wall: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/offthewallhaiku/]
*Hail in Britain, where Jon is from, can occur at any time of the year, including early spring.
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
nice start
ReplyDeletejohn
The common foe... Bringing peace ... Relative peace...
ReplyDeleteGood one - lots of potential pain here (hail, beak, thorn).
ReplyDeletepromising start - looking forward to the rest :)
ReplyDeleteAndrew: It's coming... :-)
ReplyDeleteJohn: Thanks.
Borut: So true.
Jem: :-) Thanks.
Polona: Thank you.