2008-11-05
Renhai Reflections 37: Chromatic Transitions
Chromatic Transitions
by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Toshiaki Koike (tk)*,
Written: Oct 1 to Nov 5, 2008
Rain puddle — the traffic light changes / green to yellow. /tk
Tall downtown building — /vs coloured leaves in the window. /tk
Withering bush — a branch's image ripples / in the pond. /vs
*Toshiaki, originally from Iwakura, Japan, currently lives in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada.
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this one is very nice. I really like the minimalism in your writings. I normally like the first 3 lines in itself, of your posts... this one is very gentle and zen like... are a zen practicioner?... cheers.
good set, Masago..
traffic lights and climes keep changing -- signals help.
the wind seems sure to have coloured leaves
and reflections -- good at any stage...
my appreiciation now is going beyond concepts.
thanks Masago..
wishes!
devika
so vivid - beautiful!
I like each of these equally well - very beautiful images!
Masago,
i would still like to have the links :-)
btw, the title just caught my notice..something i can very much relate with and appreciate its connection with the Renhai...
wishes!
devika
delightful
john
was checking fo notes :-)
wishes!
devika
Thank you all on behalf of Toshiaki and me.
Blog Author: You are very kind. Thank you. I'm not an official Zen practitioner but I like to write haiku with a Zen approach (objective observance).
Devika: I'm pleased your appreciation is being stretched. :-)
I really like the first two - the way they give us a burst of colour where we might not expect to find it.
Jem: Thanks.
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