2008-12-16

Renhai Reflections 57: Tiny Points


Tiny Points
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Through branches
of willow: festive lights
from their house.

Moonlight on the frost
in shoots of wild grass.

Points of brightness
dot the heavenly dome
above this meadow.

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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi8:24 PM, December 16, 2008

    Very Chrismas feel...
    loved it, all

    seasons greetings, Masago!

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Janice Thomson6:13 AM, December 17, 2008

    A lovely winter renhai with sparkling lights everywhere. Good one Vaughn.

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  3. get zapped11:16 AM, December 17, 2008

    Wintery words bring the image to heart.

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  4. J. Andrew Lockhart11:27 PM, December 17, 2008

    another good one. :)

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  5. John McDonald2:12 AM, December 18, 2008

    loved it
    john

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  6. Masago6:00 PM, December 18, 2008

    Thank you everyone, and Seasons Greetings to all!

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  7. Pamela10:44 PM, December 18, 2008

    should be on a card on someone's fireplace mantel!

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  8. jem8:26 AM, December 22, 2008

    Well noticed the way that other things can frame these little lights to help us notice them more.

    With 'heavenly dome' are you referring to the sky? or to an actual dome? The phrase didn't quite work for me, it felt a little too heavily poetic for you? (I hope you don't mind me speaking out like this?)

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