2009-02-06


Chattering Jay

A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Time to pay for
the dinner — he discovers
his wallet is gone. /vs

The snowman loses his nose — /zh.r
a jay chatters from above. /vs

New gossip
quickly spreads around —
the wife learns last. /zh.r

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0004.htm

[This is a Renhai written about a year ago.]

6 comments:

  1. I once lost my purse in the Calgary Tower restaurant - it had revolved with the outer ledge and someone must have snatched it - it was a most embarrassing moment.
    Good work Zhanna and Vaughn.

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  2. Thank you all from Zhanna and me.

    Janice: ouch!

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  3. Your work surprised me a lot because it's been a long time since I found this wonderful sharing.

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