2009-03-12

Renhai Reflections 86: Pilgrim


Pilgrim
A Renhai by Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Frozen pond —
a faint figure approaches
through the fog. /vs

Each pattern glitters — /vs
a name in the frosted window. /vj

Misty eyed
she bids farewell —
fading moon. /vj

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0124.htm

[This Renhai was written with Dr. Vidur Jyoti who lives in India.]

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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi8:59 PM, March 12, 2009

    Lovely set, Masago
    Nice to see the Indian collaboration :)

    All three are good, the first especially was striking for the title..

    and the last -- a very poetic imagery :)

    wishes
    devika

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  2. John McDonald2:52 AM, March 13, 2009

    enjoyed as usual
    john

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  3. polona1:13 PM, March 13, 2009

    a secret romance?
    enjoyed this

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  4. Janice Thomson11:21 PM, March 13, 2009

    These are wonderful verses - the imagery so sharp.

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  5. Borut3:45 AM, March 14, 2009

    A perfect image of Maya!:)

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  6. Pamela10:41 AM, March 14, 2009

    beautiful --

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  7. Masago5:41 PM, March 15, 2009

    Thank you all on behalf of Vidur and me.

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  8. jem4:32 AM, March 16, 2009

    Beautiful and wistful throughout. And (forgive my stereotypes) not what I might have expected from Indian haiku with the cool / cold images.

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