2009-05-12

Renhai Reflections 105: Sunrise, Sunset


Sunrise, Sunset
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

Coral ledge —
a seahorse expels babies
from his pouch. /vs

A piece of string in the beak — /vs
among tree buds, a new nest. /jd

In the garden rocks
a snake waits for prey —
sunrise, sunset. /jd

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0040.htm

[This is the last one in the triad series that was written with John Daleiden (US) a year ago.]

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6 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi9:15 PM, May 12, 2009

    Again a good series, Masago and John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Janice Thomson10:47 AM, May 13, 2009

    These were excellent! - such different perspectives from the same 2 lines - this is my favorite...I think :)

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  3. Ralf Bröker3:04 PM, May 13, 2009

    Live is "a piece of string in the beak". And we were born and will die. Eight lines which touch me deep.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. andrew10:25 PM, May 13, 2009

    A lot to see!

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  5. jem3:38 AM, June 15, 2009

    I've been away too long. It's good to be back and to catch up.

    A lovely introduction to three little creatures.

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