2009-05-17
Renhai Reflections 107: Till Time is Up
Till Time is Up
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
A new minute —
I shift and sink down
with the others. /zh.r
This narrow glass passage, /zh.r
room for a few at a time. /vs
Finally through,
pushed to the clear-view wall:
eggs out of the pot. /vs
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7 comments:
Interesting series, Masago and Zhanna :)
The first reminded me of the days when we used to play in the sea waves...The note clarified :)
wishes,
devika
the ending- I like that! :)
First thought was a flash-back to the drop which fell into the sea. Then I felt like drowning - and found myself as ;-) some kind of Humpti Dumpti (which is not too far away from reality). Like it!
Best wishes
Ralf
were these eggs boiled for colouring at Easter
much love
gillena
Thanks everyone! :-)
Gillena: Possibly so (but not at our house). :-)
This was a unique and most enjoyable perspective.
really enjoyed
john
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