2009-06-07
Renhai Reflections 113: Another Beginning
Another Beginning
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)
Summer clouds —
monks beneath a tree
mutter prayers. /vj
A grove of Margosa trees — /vs
stirrings under fallen leaves. /vj
Silk sheets —
the clock radio comes on
with sounds of Bach. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0153.htm
[This was written with Dr. Vidur Jyoti from India. Check the notes for background info about season usage and other features of this Renhai.]
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11 comments:
The connections between verse one and three are fantastic. I love Bach and this reflection is stunning. I bow to this.
Best wishes
Ralf
I loved the sets, and the way the links work..
Margosa...yes, they abound the Delhi streets and i read that they play a good role in reducing air pollution..and keeping many air borne diseases off!
wishes,
devika
evocative Vaughn
john
This is wonderful - each verse presenting a lovely image. Most enjoyable.
I always like the sound of Bach!
Thank you all very much!
silk sheets... I wish!
I like the way the clouds from the first seem to link to the sheets from the last. That sense of lying under something soft.
Okay...I'm trying to decide which I love more-listening to Bach or the feel of silk sheets. Luckily, here I don't have to decide! Love it!!!
Your blog is beautiful, as beautiful ideas!
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