2009-09-25

Renhai Reflections 139: Bright and Loud


Bright and Loud
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Reflected in eyes,
the wild, electric dance
between the clouds. /zh.r

Cracking, crashing booms... /vs
Sounds muffled under the bed... /zh.r

A sudden flash
spreads across the harbour -
town lights darken. /vs

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8 comments:

  1. John McDonald2:19 AM, September 26, 2009

    lovely monochromatic picture
    john

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  2. Gillena Cox6:40 AM, September 26, 2009

    a thread of excitement runs from verse to verse

    much love
    gillena

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  3. Janice Thomson6:43 AM, September 26, 2009

    Having been struck by lightning a number of times in a 747 above Toronto these verses take on a strong imagery for me - I can almost feel the lightning again :)

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  4. Pamela12:07 PM, September 26, 2009

    I'm giving you a standing ovation on this one!!!

    This streaked right off the screen and into my head.

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  5. Kristin Riggs11:11 PM, September 27, 2009

    The first one is my favorite...literally gave me chills. I LOVE thunderstorms...so exciting. My heart beats a little faster everytime I see those thunder clouds roll in. Bravo...these are fantastic! :)

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  6. Devika Jyothi11:29 PM, September 28, 2009

    Some really lively ones here....full of light, and sound....don't know why these make me want to hear some music! :)

    good, enjoyable sets Masago, Gillena and Zhanna :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  7. Ralf Bröker5:41 PM, September 29, 2009

    Powerful. I like the middle part a lot: I can hear the scene.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  8. Masago8:05 PM, September 30, 2009

    Thanks Everyone!

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