2009-11-29
Renhai Reflections 148: Sightings
Sightings
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Slivers of sunlight
fracture the dense stillness
deep in the forest. /jt
The half-moon dots a tower /vs
as a crow pecks his shadow. /jt
The glinting harpoon
fired from the sofa's bow
pierces the surface. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0187.htm
[This Renhai was written using a Google Wave (wave.google.com).]
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7 comments:
Good set, Janice and Masago :)
i especially loved the first...
had to read the notes for the linking,
Janice, when are you coming back at your blog?? :)
wishes,
devika
Wow! This is one of your best I think...love it.
Janice! You've been missed!
good one
john
incredible imagery and feeling to go with...
Thank you all!
[Janice has been dealing with the big flood on the West Coast] :-(
Thats her social work, right?
Hope she tides over fast and joins us...she is badly missed :(
wishes,
devika
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