2009-12-07
Renhai Reflections 151: Beyond the Pale
Beyond the Pale
A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Torn wallpaper
dangling in the breeze —
abandoned building. /jd
Desert winter blossoms - /jd
snake skin shed between spokes. /vs
Derelict bomber -
all but the engine between
stony outcroppings. /vs
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6 comments:
This reads like a movie script...may be I was watching "Rescue Dawn" the other night and some words and phrases in here brings to mind certain images from the movie :)
enjoyable, John and Masago :)
wishes,
devika
Verse one is stunning; and i loved the resonance in Verse Three
much love
gillena
ooooh...love this! Torn wallpaper...if those walls could talk, huh? :)
very evocative
john
Thank you all!
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