2010-01-17
Renhai Reflections 160: Oblivious
Oblivious
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)
A dog barks
without interruption —
ants cross the road. /jd
Two standing soldiers — /vs
children play in the wreckage. /jd
Gridlock traffic —
the bicycle we passed before
is now ahead. /vs
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0208.htm
[We wrote this Renhai as a dual-language collaborative effort, see the notes for details]
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4 comments:
Oblivious is a good title for the set...and i liked it, Masago and John :)
wishes,
devika
good work both of you
john
Thanks all!
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