2010-03-28
Renhai Reflections 179: Faintly Conducted
Faintly Conducted
A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
river park
wearing a snow hood
muted hush... /tk
raising his dark shades... /vs
somewhere, faint breathing /tk
March wedding...
this moment before the groom
lifts the veil /vs
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5 comments:
A lot of words with double meanings, sequences with many layers and ways to be read. Not easy to read, but worth it!
Best wishes
Ralf
Terrific, Vaughn!!!
Verse 3 is breathtaking leaves me wanting more; a beautiful collab
much love
gillena
Great share! I really like a lot!
I thank God I can still pick an apple off my tree and eat it on the spot without having to worry about chemicals.
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