2010-10-03
Renhai Reflections: Concealing Nooks
Concealing Nooks
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
The toddler's smile
Reveals a thick layer
of ice-cream. /vs
Glistening slug's trail — /jm
overhanging rhubarb leaves. /vs
A torn box
by the open pantry door —
cookie crumbs. /jm
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8 comments:
Interesting sets, Masago and Jerry M. :)
specially, loved the first,
wishes,
devika
lovely
john
I saw this thief yesterday. He stole the cookies out of our "special reserve". I brushed his teeth after - and he smiled at me in the mirror.
Good one!
Best wishes
Ralf
Very nice set. Love it. ;)
Neat images in each verse - great sets.
Loved Ralf's comment too :)
clever links and shifts; truly enjoyed this renhai
much love
gillena
Thank you all!
I find your blog interesting, you give great advice.
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