2011-03-26
Renhai Reflections: Slowly, Surely
Slowly, Surely
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
After ten minutes
I leave the tanning bed —
white-circled eyes. /jt
Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
the roof soaks up the sun. /jt
I start to doze off
in the bubbling hot tub —
page twenty-five... /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0266.htm
[This renhai is the third in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]
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slowly, surely, relaxing
john
Thanks John!
I want that peace...
Thanks to you, I learned many interesting things. I hope to learn more. I congratulate you for these wonderful shares. Keep it up!
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