Nature throws rice on the newlyweds - early Spring.
Link with 955: Wedding.
[My wife Janice and I were married in February and we felt beforehand the emotion expressed in this haiku. Fortunately the weather turned out lovely as did our whole wedding.]
From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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Nature throws
rice on the newlyweds -
early Spring.
Link with 955: Wedding.
[My wife Janice and I were married in February and we felt beforehand the emotion expressed in this haiku. Fortunately the weather turned out lovely as did our whole wedding.]
it rained sun beams?
lovely stuff since I've been away vaughn
john
Pamela: On our wedding, yes.
John: Thanks, welcome back.
i was thinking snowflakes...
i'm glad everything turned out fine...
Polona: Yes, it was pointed out "Nature" my be to vague. I have since revised this haiku to:
The skies throw
rice on the newlyweds -
early spring.
Hopefully this is a little clearer. :-)
Thanks.
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