2007-03-09

956. A Wedding Gift

The skies throw
rice on the newlyweds —
early Spring.

6 comments:

Masago said...

Nature throws
rice on the newlyweds -
early Spring.

Link with 955: Wedding.

[My wife Janice and I were married in February and we felt beforehand the emotion expressed in this haiku. Fortunately the weather turned out lovely as did our whole wedding.]

Pamela said...

it rained sun beams?

John McDonald said...

lovely stuff since I've been away vaughn
john

Masago said...

Pamela: On our wedding, yes.

John: Thanks, welcome back.

polona said...

i was thinking snowflakes...
i'm glad everything turned out fine...

Masago said...

Polona: Yes, it was pointed out "Nature" my be to vague. I have since revised this haiku to:

The skies throw
rice on the newlyweds -
early spring.

Hopefully this is a little clearer. :-)
Thanks.