From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
11 comments:
I like this image a lot.
Might I make a small suggestion?
shallow pond
a white crane
looks skyward
And if not, please ignore....:)
wonderful!
'All fish gone... What to do!? God help me...!'
like a lot
john
perhaps he knows something we don't.
love it!
Aurora: Thanks, that reads good (I do like to have the second line longer than the other lines... maybe there's a way).
Andrew: Thanks.
Borut: Yeah (fly to the next pond?) :-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: Perhaps so. Thanks. :-)
He's trying to fool the fish.
I love the imagery. Stark and serene...
Pat: Yeah, I've seen that ploy before. :-)
gz: Thanks!
we've been watching for them to discover our goldfish pond.
Pamela: I some friends who share this "vigil" with you.
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