2008-02-05

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.

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6 comments:

  1. Pamela12:35 AM, February 06, 2008

    The new one is FANTASTIC. Love it

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  2. John McDonald1:54 AM, February 06, 2008

    made me smile good one
    john

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  3. floots12:29 PM, February 06, 2008

    ditto :)
    thank you

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  4. polona2:05 PM, February 06, 2008

    nice :)

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  5. J. Andrew Lockhart6:16 PM, February 06, 2008

    I've never figured out ice fishing!

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  6. Masago6:21 PM, February 06, 2008

    Pamela: Thank you!

    John: :-) Thanks.

    Floots: Thanks.

    Polona: Thank you.

    Andrew: I hear ya, I haven't really done it myself, just watched as a kid.

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