by Masago: Rengay #25 (Feb 17-23, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
A school of fish / under the lake ice — deep winter.
Recess, one hour away — thoughts of fun and snow.
We come inside / after the bell... the smell / of wet woolens.
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6 comments:
not something I want to smell :)
boy - this takes me back a long way
Ditto Andrew and Floots.:)
well captured
john
nice progression
Andrew: :-) ...especially someone else's.
Floots: :-)
Borut: :-) :-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thank you.
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