by Jon Davey (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #26 (Feb 24 - Mar 1, 2008) Verse 1 (of 6):
Hail storm — sparrow and sparrowhawk / sheltered in a blackthorn. /jd
This rengay was written with Jon Davey who was born in Redruth, England. He gained a degree in English and European Thought & Literature from the Cambridge College of Art and Technology and later became a primary school teacher in Camborne, Cornwall. Jon is now living in a converted barn in the small village of Brea with partner Philippa and family. Jon began writing haiku in the early 1980's.
Masago and Jon were partners in a couple of Off-the-Wall Rengay exercises in July, 2007:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uDqqFJHbSF9aA
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uDWTQXn2hE0EA
[Off-the-Wall: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/offthewallhaiku/]
*Hail in Britain, where Jon is from, can occur at any time of the year, including early spring.
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
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5 comments:
nice start
john
The common foe... Bringing peace ... Relative peace...
Good one - lots of potential pain here (hail, beak, thorn).
promising start - looking forward to the rest :)
Andrew: It's coming... :-)
John: Thanks.
Borut: So true.
Jem: :-) Thanks.
Polona: Thank you.
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