2009-02-06
Chattering Jay
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Time to pay for
the dinner — he discovers
his wallet is gone. /vs
The snowman loses his nose — /zh.r
a jay chatters from above. /vs
New gossip
quickly spreads around —
the wife learns last. /zh.r
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0004.htm
[This is a Renhai written about a year ago.]
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6 comments:
enjoyed this one
john
interesting....
I once lost my purse in the Calgary Tower restaurant - it had revolved with the outer ledge and someone must have snatched it - it was a most embarrassing moment.
Good work Zhanna and Vaughn.
good work again
Thank you all from Zhanna and me.
Janice: ouch!
Your work surprised me a lot because it's been a long time since I found this wonderful sharing.
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