2009-02-19
Renhai Reflections 80: Change of Plans
Change of Plans
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
The old oak —
a branch in the blizzard
falls to the ground.
The power cuts suddenly —
moonlight on snow outside.
Crackling fire —
embers flicker patterns
across her cheek.
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The title struck a chord straight...
I myself am into a change of plan, Masago...like decided to leave of my regulars for good -- both theirs and mine :)
I loved the second much...i love sitting outside in such times :)
first -- an inevitability of time perhaps...
third -- i have just posted a new one at my poetry blog
http://devika-poetry.blogspot.com/
somehow the reminded of the image there at "Shadows"
now, i need to say -- i have closed comments at my blogs Masago..those with different motives come to spit their spite there...and was not really getting good, kind-hearted support except from a very few...and that would stay, i hope...just saying. :)
hope you get better soon, take care,
wishes,
devika
evocative
john
Lovely - a great sense of mood and moment in each. My favourite is the last, perhaps because I'm ready to be warmed by then. I like the sense that the you learn more about the face and the fire flickers when they come together than when you see them apart.
very nice... I could feel the heat of the fire.
very cold...
Thank you all!
Came for a new one, Masago..
come again later :)
wishes,
devika
there's a story in this one :)
like it
this is one of my favourites of late. its draws some strong images. cheers
Love the last verse Vaughn - a sense of softness and tenderness
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