2009-07-15
Renhai Reflections 124: Wee Interactions
Wee Interactions
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
Buzzing bees
swarm around spirea
laden with pollen. /vs
An ant scurries higher — /vs
peonies scent the air. /jt
Rose bramble —
a sated earwig sleeps
inside a bud. /jt
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10 comments:
That last had the signature of Janice on it :)
all nice, Masago and Janice...and Janice, my friend when are you back at yours -- I also miss you badly, when I move around! :)
wishes,
devika
I almost sneezed! :)
enjoyed
john
What makes the world go round: the wheel of life - the roundabout - the vicious circle!?:)
Daily routine for someone but yet beautiful moments to contemplate for the rest. Is there The One writing heavenly haiku about us running daily errands?
'a sated earwig sleeps'
i absolutely love the language in this entire renhai; good job you two
much love
gillena
It has a sweet, peaceful feeling. I like poems about nature in general.
Zhanna
Thank you all!
you really have been sneaking around in the garden with this verse. Lovely
That last part is especially strong. It really sums up certain sorts of summer days. The sort I haven't seen much of this year :)
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