2009-08-07
Renhai Reflections 130: On Board
On Board
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)
Window seat...
light then dark
dark then light. /bk
The smell of oiled timber — /vs
riding the rails, a runaway. /bk
He grabs her hand
as they rush the summit —
roller coaster. /vs
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10 comments:
An enjoyable train journey through tunnels, Masago and Betty :)
the last --am failing to get it clearly,
wishes,
devika
Very nice. :)
wheeeee!!!!! good one
john
Thank you all.
Devika, are you familiar with roller coasters where you are?
Roller coasters...I don't go near it! Some amusement parks have it :)
I am afraid of this head spinning games...even if its fun :)
I was looking for a straight connection between 1 & 3...and hence that comment, Masago :)
wishes,
devika
Devika, Ah, I see. :-) Hopefully the comments clarified things.
yes Masago :)
devika
Lonely at the top?!:)
Puuh, this goes up and down very fast. And when I finished this Renhai, I wanted to start again. Good one!
Best wishes
Ralf
I like it. :)
It's always very pleasant to visit your blog and read your work.
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