2009-08-26
Renhai Reflections 134: Drawn Up
Drawn Up
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
The sleeping mount
rumbles back to life —
molten cauldron. /vs
Dreaming of lake sailing — /vs
awakened... the leaf blower. /bk
A blue sea beckons ...
waiting in the marina
"Suzie Q". /bk
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10 comments:
There's enough to draw one to life...and some mentions I like about it --dreaming, awakened, blue sea, marina....words that I love :)
Enjoyable series, Betty and Masago :)
wishes,
devika
yes most enjoyable
john
Wonderful voyage in my mind. At least I see the my father's early love. Very nice.
Best wishes
Ralf
I like the part about waking up...hard to snap back to reality sometimes. :)
I enjoyed it.
Zhanna
A most enjoyable multi-faceted Renhai. Great work Betty and Vaughn.
nice work.
after a long drive
rain on the lake . . .
so soothing
go back to sleep mountain -- (:
Thank you all very much!
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