2009-09-03
Renhai Reflections 135: Here...
Here...
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Quiet beach —
a wave washes over
the last sand wall. /vs
Her diary... one page turned down /bk
a tear begins to well. /vs
Found in the attic —
I should have known,
crumbling pages /bk
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8 comments:
Nice set, Betty and Masago,
and yet, there are many things i should have known,
that came as a conclusion after reading :)
wishes,
devika
This is really nice...I have been feeling so nostalgic and reflective here lately, so I completely identify with the tears welling up reading a diary entry. Very touching.
yes a nice set
john
Nice connection between them. Things in passing, like summer to autumn.
An evocative as well as emotive set - change always brings a touch of melancholy with it. Very much enjoyed these.
Left a suspended effect, but truly enjoyed every word and the creative process behind them.
Very nice scene, though I am surprised about about the double-page. As a special sort of dissonance it makes me think a lot - unfortunately I don't find the key to the box. May be later ...
Best wishes
Ralf
Thanks all!
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