2009-09-25
Renhai Reflections 139: Bright and Loud
Bright and Loud
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
Reflected in eyes,
the wild, electric dance
between the clouds. /zh.r
Cracking, crashing booms... /vs
Sounds muffled under the bed... /zh.r
A sudden flash
spreads across the harbour -
town lights darken. /vs
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8 comments:
lovely monochromatic picture
john
a thread of excitement runs from verse to verse
much love
gillena
Having been struck by lightning a number of times in a 747 above Toronto these verses take on a strong imagery for me - I can almost feel the lightning again :)
I'm giving you a standing ovation on this one!!!
This streaked right off the screen and into my head.
The first one is my favorite...literally gave me chills. I LOVE thunderstorms...so exciting. My heart beats a little faster everytime I see those thunder clouds roll in. Bravo...these are fantastic! :)
Some really lively ones here....full of light, and sound....don't know why these make me want to hear some music! :)
good, enjoyable sets Masago, Gillena and Zhanna :)
wishes,
devika
Powerful. I like the middle part a lot: I can hear the scene.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thanks Everyone!
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