2010-02-04
Renhai Reflections 165: A Renhai, Step by Step: Another verse
A Renhai, Step by Step: Another verse
by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
A snow storm's
layer of white velvet —
creek bed.
Possible links:
-Snow, storm, whiteness.
-Layering, flatness.
-Velvet, type of fabric.
-Body of water, aquatic (frozen).
-Channel, line.
-Bed, peacefulness.
From this list I am impressed by the idea of the snow storm and the frozen creek lying silently, perhaps not so warmly, under the pure untouched, newly fallen blanket of snow. In a flash of inspiration this verse emerges:
Howling north wind —
I snuggle a bit deeper
under the sheets.
The links are therefore:
-Covered, sheltered.
-Snow storm / North wind.
-Cloth, material (Velvet / Sheets).
-Bed.
Now, on to the middle lines...
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6 comments:
oh lo...."in a flash of inspiration" -- thats it! but very interesting progression, Masago :)
wishes,
devika
I love this!!! Snuggling deeper in the sheets...that is SO me on these cold winter mornings...every morning! :)
yes enjoying this
john
I am allowed to follow your work flow. Great to see someone else living poetry!
Best wishes
Ralf
Again, thank you all for coming along for this "ride".
I wonder how you got so good. This is really a fascinating blog, lots of stuff that I can Get into. One thing I just want to say is that your Blog is so perfect!
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