2010-05-07
Renhai Reflections 182: Concurrent
Concurrent
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
the old shopkeeper
bagging a purchase; he greets
a new customer /gc
between the calls of a finch /vs
the street-sweeper sneezes, dawn /gc
the haunting echo
of a hidden distant loon...
I pass our lunch pack /vs
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6 comments:
well done both of you
john
Well done, indeed. It is clearly happening in my mind.
Best wishes
Ralf
The images present themselves strongly - very much enjoyed.
Thank you all!
of course I love the bird references.
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