2010-05-16
Renhai Reflections 183: Within, Without
Within, Without
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
kitchen sink —
the bowl floats within
a submerged pot. /jm
inch of rain in the dog dish — /jm
the mailbox, overflowing... /vs
sea floor oil leak —
the lowered containment vessel
plugs with ice /vs
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[See notes for info about the oil leak reference in verse 3.]
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6 comments:
Re-contextualizes the story in the headlines. Well done.
Like how the simple everyday images of the top two verses conclude with the (hopefully) rarer occurrence of the final verse. Well done.
the oil has leaked right into your Renhai. Sad... but can't be ignored.
enjoyed
john
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