by Toshiaki Koike (tk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #21 (Jan 20-26, 2008) Verses 1-2 (of 6):
Icy Road — a plastic bag rolls, right, left. /tk
A tangled cassette tape — an end flaps in the chill. /vs
[Every so often one encounters a broken cassette tape with the tape inside tangled up, often in a ball on a tree or bush.]
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5 comments:
mankind's detritus making its own way
nice one
I find this very poetic - essentially we're alone...:) ... Yes, we're nothing... We don't even exists... A man as a plastic bag and a tape with prerecorded life script...
nicely progressing
john
good if not pretty... still several ways to go...
Floots: Yes, thank you.
Borut: What an insight.
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thanks.
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