by Toshiaki Koike (tk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #21 (Jan 20-26, 2008) Verses 1-6 (of 6):
Icy Road — a plastic bag rolls, right, left. /tk
A tangled cassette tape — an end flaps in the chill. /vs
Revolving door — cold and warm air / briefly touch. /tk
Frost patterns / form on the window pane — finger print. /vs
A single glove — fingers / point toward the exit. /tk
Clock tower — big and little hands frozen / at nine-twelve. /vs
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4 comments:
really enjoyed this series for reasons already given and liked this last piece of the puzzle
(9.12 escaped me - unless it was a rather wide v for vaughn) :)
thanks to you both
yes enjoyed this one too
john
love this series but can't quite figure it out... ok, cold is obvious enough and the second theme is almost, but not quite, there...
Floots: Thanks, see today's post for the significance of 9.12. I like your wide V, idea, but I hadn't thought of as short for V. But now that you mention it, maybe it could be symbolic of Victory.
John: Thank you.
Polona: Thanks, I think you almost have a grasp of one theme. Well done.
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