by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game — a cell-phone instant replay.
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4 comments:
love that juxtaposition/double meaning
thank you
Nice observation. But it leaves me a little sad too. All the technology at our disposal makes me wonder if our memory and minds eye grows lazy...
kind of incongruous...
Andrew: ;-)
Floots: Thank you!
Jem: Thanks. It only seems to worsen.
Polona: Indeed.
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