by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008) Summary
Summer's Hose
A layer of ice
forms on the old sleigh —
spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose
still lying as it was.
Two straws
in an empty glass —
French Café.
New car on-line —
the web page accepts my
credit card.
We go for a spin —
my wallet stays at home.
The lawyer arrives
to work out the details...
estate will.
The central theme in this rengay is "Left There": Sleigh in the yard, Hose in the yard, Straws in a glass, Credit card number at a website, Wallet at home, Will left ahead.
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8 comments:
wonderful work!!
"The lawyer arrives" - reminds me of my past. :)
good one
john
:-)
well done again. the rengay as a whole tells quite a story
This is unusually affecting, Vaughn.
Andrew: Thank you so much. :-)
John: Thanks, John.
Polona: Many thanks.
Bill: Appreciate the kind words.
I found it very poignant.
(My word verification was "tllen"... and I guess that describes your rengay, too. It was very telling!"
Vaughn I missed that credit card #, could you type that again.
Pamela: Thanks. What is "ttlen"?
Pat: Try, 4505-555-555-555.
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