by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
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6 comments:
yes! I know this so well. :)
hair today - gone tomorrow :)
had to laugh out loud
john
These are great. That sense of slow revelation. What was always there becoming obvious. But there is a possible negativity in each too, for me at least. The clean snow, plain sand and full head of hair hold some appeal that the revealed interrupts.
entropy rules ok
Andrew: :-)
Floots: *LOL*
John: :-)
Jem: Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful insights.
Polona: Relentlessly.
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