2009-01-21
Renhai Reflections 69: Barnyard Affairs
Barnyard Affairs
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Hole in the fence —
a llama keeps guard over
newborn calves. /jt
Loud chirps from the barn — /jt
the cat slips through a window. /vs
The spring sun
melts snow off an old
cream separator. /vs
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[...still pining for spring...]
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9 comments:
Spring already, Oh God..
"Loud chirps from the barn the cat slips through a window."
Liked this one :)
wishes,
devika
just seeing the word "spring" did it for me! :)
Great title for this. The connections that make and break. And the shift from the living to the inanimate in the last part works well. The middle really has a sense of suspense.
How fascinating - seeing through things!:)
i was thinking about our old separator just the other day.
great minds....
how refreshing!
i can't wait... this miserable winter is making me feel suicidal!
enjoyed this one as well
much love
gillena
Thank you all!
Polona: Hang in there!!!
My thanks too!
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